Thursday, September 20, 2012

Janie Rabbit


By Danielle
                                                
   There once was a rabbit named Janie. Janie is an adult rabbit, she is unique in 2 ways 1:she has red lightning bolts on her black silky thick fur, and 2: because she can send lightning bolts and strike the enemy. One sunny day Janie saw that it was a nice day for going on a walk, she was hopping along the covered with grass Merry Berry Lane when she stopped and gasped there was a rattlesnake going towards a little mouse. Now Janie thought she had seen this child before, a long braid, little glasses, dyed tail, “oh” Janie gasped “Melinda!!” the little brown mouse looked at her but then she saw the snake and froze in terror “go shoo” Janie said to the rattlesnake and the little Melinda unfroze and said embarrassed “thank you for saving my life for the 5th time” “no problem” Janie said while handing a piece of cheese to her“this might help” Janie said soothingly “it always does” Melinda answered “bye Janie!” then Janie went on hopping along but no sooner she was stopped by the King and his warriors “oh hello your majesty” Janie said cheerfully “ we  have heard about your powers and we don’t believe in them” the king said “then why do you have all those warriors with you?” She asked “well lets not dilly-dally and I’ll give my warriors some command they have been waiting a long time to hear Attack” the king shouted, then Janie twitched her ear towards and a huge black storm cloud came  “It’s only a light drizzle” but it wasn’t big huge raindrops splattered down then one by one they got struck Janie heard hisses of pain then she heard “I’ll get you somehow”. After the storm was over stuffed the rattle snakes inside her pack when she was done there were10 more rattlesnakes “oh I’ll leave those for Coyote Joe” and she hopped back to her village the doctor was happy for the venom and the dancers were happy for the rattles “is that a early Christmas present for me” they both said together. That night there was a feast or rattlesnake stew and to finish it off a dance from the dancers with rattles.

 The End

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